Monday, June 10, 2019

writing lesson showing not telling Mrs Boyle

angry
he got a tomato face
he was clenching his fists
there head pumping
his veins popping
her eyes are bulging
you could tell he was holding himself back

embarrassed
trying to hide his face
her heart went slow then fast
short of breath
trying to block out the sound of laughter

shocked
mouth opened
eyes bulging
gasping
stepping backward

happy
smiling uncontrollably
over the moon

shy
trying to hide
lost of words
looking at the floor
too scared to get judged so you don`t do anything
quite

Sad
mind goes dark
waterworks
not wanting to do anything
feels like you're in a dark room with no light

sick
Hands on stomach or head
red eyes
black circles underneath your eyes
not moving a muscle
vomiting

cold
feels like an iceberg
turned into a snowman


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